Call with Pilar

Pilar was awesome.
She spent 5 minutes telling me she liked my work and then and hour and a half telling me what's wrong with it.
She was right on 99% of it.

Rewriting as we speak...

Minutes away...

I am about to call the great Pilar Alessandra for profession consultation on the script.

I'm excited and nervous.

Will she think it stinks? Will she think I am a natural? Will it just be blah?

First Copy

RE-WRITES

Amanda took the first crack at the sctipt. She liked it a lot and said it made her cry. I think she cried because she was so happy that I finished it.

Lots of punctuation and spelling mistakes.

Need to re-work a few things.

Feeling great about it.